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heylise
February 1st, 2008, 07:07 AM
Mix all characters you need for a story..
...Sorry, no story..
maremaria
February 1st, 2008, 02:40 PM
LiSe,
Great Idea !!!
Be back with my story .....
Maria
maremaria
February 2nd, 2008, 02:02 AM
back with ......a dragon in absence
A bird without wings
a cart without wheels
and the dragon’s power
can’t be released
Jian is looking for her other Jian
And yin is missing her powerful yang
But the eye is blind
the ear is deafen
And dragon is still.
Can’t reach the heaven.
The heaven speaks,
But the ear is busy
Of all the eyes
The third is sleeping.
Wings are hurt
The bird can’t fly
With broken wheels
The cart won’t roll
No dancing dragon
In heaven’s floor
The clouds in sky
don’t hold a rain
And every step,
seems like in vain
hilary
February 2nd, 2008, 04:36 PM
Sorry about the non-appearing images: that may be a side-effect of measures I took to streamline the forum's usage of the database, so it wouldn't go down so often. It seems to have worked - at least, I haven't got the 100s of database error messages for a long time. (And now I've jinxed it, haven't I?)
You can still open all the images in new windows and read stories. With one eye, can see; lame, can still walk.
heylise
February 2nd, 2008, 05:42 PM
Maria, your poem is great!
It does make me sad. There are lots of times like this, when the dragon does not appear, and everything seems to go wrong and your heart cannot find its happiness back.
The little story I wanted to post has a good ending, but it is not my own story. I found it, I also figured out now how I can show it. Together with the things I want to tell about it, or rather show with pictures. I know, I can open them in other windows, but then it is a record or so, and not a picture-book story anymore.
I am very happy that it inspired you to post your poem. It is very beautiful.
LiSe
maremaria
February 2nd, 2008, 07:20 PM
Yes LiSe, it is a sad poem, but brought also joy to me. Darkness and light together.
Thank you for posting that “challenge”
:hug:
Maria
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