Be a little kind

[candid]

a king's son grasps

and takes women

and shows them..

they feel

but have not seen


the king watches stroking his beard

wondering upon this child he'd reared

he knows he'll learn

play with fire and you'll burn


don't go cold son

remember your place

you have not outgrown

this human race


be open and kind

remember your place

use a little grace

don't lose face

[val]

Candid...

Did you write this? Is this about your son? If I remember correctly, didn't you mention a son in another thread? Or was that someone else? Sorry...my grey matter is getting brittle...*grin*

Love,

Val

[candid]

Val,

Yes.. just word doodles. I do have two sons I've raised, three if I count one given up for adoption whom I've become close with. No, its not about them but about me. Or anyone, really. I am the king, the son and the mystery (woman). I am the seeker and the sought. And its important to remember who I am and what I'm not.

My gray matter increases every day. We are talking about hair, no? *smirk*

[val]

Candid...

Cool. I just got your response, and I thought what a lovely idea this open space is, so people like you can post treats like this once in awhile.

Thank you Hilary!
Thank you Candid!

Love,

Val

[yellowblue]

Candid,

I like your song... your "word doodles".

They made me think a lot, about 44, the powerful maiden, the yin amoung the yang, the meaning and my role in this life.

Still sorting it out, but coming closer : )

Thanks for sharing and inspiring,
Deb

[heylise]

Beautiful, to keep with me for a long time, humming around in my head.

Thanks
LiSe